93 Replies to “Writing an Effective Thesis Statement

  1. I found your explanation of how to write a thesis statement excellent.  I teach a dev ed writing class at a community college in southern Oregon.  May I put your video on my Libguide for my students to view?

  2. This was a homework assignment, but it was awesome!  Def a life long lesson-plus short and straight to the point.  Just like a Thesis Statement 😉

  3. Thank you so much!  All of the other videos I found were long and only spoke about one thesis.  This will give my students much needed direction.  I appreciate your video!  Thanks 🙂

  4. Just wanted to let you know that I show your video to my film class to prep them for writing their essays and papers.

  5. Our teacher showed this to us, and when you said claim I misunderstood it for CLIENT. When she asked us about the parts of a thesis I had to raise my frickin hand and say client….

  6. What's up with this inspirational video? XD
    I can't write my essay anymore cuz I'm too distracted thinking about my goals and future success :'v

  7. Thank you so much for this video! It is the most clear and concise explanation for writing a thesis statement. I've shown it to all my 8th grade students, and it's helped me better support them in writing their thesis statements!

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  9. good content, however; the background music was rather distracting. perhaps when you edit your video, you could lower the music volume down some. also, your mic had a little echo in the middle. but, again, the content was good. very helpful. keep up the good work!

  10. Thanks for your tips. Specially for time management. During writing thesis statement one should avoid burying a great thesis statement in the middle of a paragraph. Make it as clear & as specific as possible; Do not use murky words. Indicate the point of your paper but avoid sentence structures like, “The point of my paper is…” . https://edubirdie.com/write-a-thesis-statement must help you to write your thesis statement.

  11. This is a random thesis:

    “Although going to college demands careful time management and dedication, pursuing a degree of your choice is potentially beneficial for any work field you choose to be part of.”

    Could you please highlight any mistakes and thereby correct them please and thank you:-)

  12. Thank you so much for making this video, over summer I forgot about this, but I was to shy to ask my teacher. This was an amazing video that told you a lot on how to make this in only 2 minutes! (rounding up the time).

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  14. thank you so much for the video. I took a two year break from college and everything i've learned went out the window. this video was a great refresher.

  15. Can someone clarify, it was mentioned in another video that the thesis statement ideally should be at the end of an introduction. Is this correct?

  16. Thank uuu I was kinda unclear about what exactly it was, im over here studying lol my staar test is tmrw 💀💀 but thank u lol

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